Reflection on project feedback

I found the feedback very beneficial towards my project this time around . Maybe due to the fact that we had a better idea what was expected of us this time around . 

To clarify the comments I will list points made that firstly I felt were successful:

Piece 9 

Good marketing strategy for the website 

Good use of digital media

Language suitable for purpose intended

Good feedback on logo and choice of name

Piece 10

Strong design

Suitable layout for purpose intended

Good use of font 

Clear and concise

Constructive Criticism

Piece 9

Piece seems a little rushed,

I need to watch punctuation.

A more in-depth investigation into marketing this specific website.

Could think about using web 3.0 .. videos etc..

 

Piece 10

Seems a little cold in its appearance.

 Unique element is needed for this module that gives it the edge from a normal website

Since receiving the feedback I have been contemplating how to improve the project by creating a unique idea for it. I think since undertaking this project I have visualizing the design and layout not to mention the function of the website for its practicalities , but not for its creative concepts . I regret in ways not taking a more organic approach where I could have been more conceptual and abstract with my ideas, as I feel I am still thinking about the project on literal level .

So the thinking cap is on now how to pursue this module in a more creative , unique way that will enable content to be written for it .

It is very interesting to receive feedback from fellow class mates and I have evaluated all their opinions and have taken them on board . I hope some of my feedback was given the others food for thought also .